Chapter 9 - THE FIRST DRAFT
The first draft was worse.
Much worse.
Priya opened the file in her office while June and I sat across from her desk.
Daniel was not invited.
The document had been created seven months earlier by a private estate-planning consultant Elaine used for family matters. It contained an entire section that had been removed before Mark Feldman prepared the final prenup.
That section proposed transferring a controlling interest in any “marriage-adjacent commercial venture” into a family holding entity managed by Daniel and Robert Mercer.
Vow & Venue was named specifically.
June stared at the screen.
“They were going to put our company in a family holding company?”
“Proposed,” Priya corrected.
“Attempted kidnapping with better fonts.”
Priya almost smiled.
I could not.
There was a comment in the document margin beside one paragraph.
D.M. thinks C.B. may resist if presented too early.
D.M.
Daniel Mercer.
My stomach turned.
Another comment:
E.M. prefers execution before ceremony to avoid leverage issues later.
Elaine Mercer.
I sat back.
For days, a tiny part of me had clung to one hope: that Daniel had gotten swept into a plan his mother created. That his worst choices came from weakness, not intention.
The file killed that hope.
June read the comments again.
“He knew seven months ago.”
“Yes.”
“And he still let you order invitations.”
“Yes.”
“And write vows.”
I looked down.
“Yes.”
Priya closed the laptop.
“Claire, I’m going to say something as your lawyer that has nothing to do with the law.”
I nodded.
“Go home. Sleep.”
“I don’t live there anymore.”
“Then go wherever home is this week.”
I almost laughed.
That night, home was Lucas’s guest room.
June’s apartment was full because my mother had extended her trip and refused to leave me alone. Lucas offered his spare room after I complained that my mother snored and June talked in her sleep.
He put clean sheets on the bed and left a toothbrush in the bathroom without making it weird.
At two in the morning, I found him sitting on the back steps with a glass of water.
“You can’t sleep either?” I asked.
“I have the emotional range of a raccoon. Night is my natural habitat.”
I sat beside him.
For a while we listened to traffic from the avenue.
Then I said, “Did you ever hate him?”
Lucas did not pretend not to understand.
“Sometimes.”
“Why?”
“Because he made you smaller.”
The answer hurt.
“You should’ve told me.”
“I should have.”
I looked at him.
“I’m serious.”
“So am I.”
He rubbed his hands together.
“I was afraid if I pushed, you’d choose him and stop speaking to me completely.”
“I basically did anyway.”
“Yeah.”
No accusation.
Just truth.
I stared at the porch railing.
“I’m sorry.”
“You don’t owe me an apology for having a relationship.”
“I owe you one for letting that relationship erase people.”
He thought about that.
“Okay. I accept that apology.”
Something warm and painful moved through my chest.
He had always done that. Let words mean what they meant without stretching them into another conversation.
I looked at him.
“Daniel used to say you had a thing for me.”
Lucas coughed.
Actually coughed.
I raised an eyebrow.
“That’s subtle.”
He stared straight ahead.
“Daniel said a lot of things.”
“That was not an answer.”
He sighed.
“College? Maybe a little.”
“A little?”
“I was twenty-one. You owned one leather jacket and thought black coffee counted as a personality.”
“It did count as a personality.”
“You were unbearable.”
I smiled for the first time that day.
Then his face became serious.
“Claire, whatever I felt then does not matter right now.”
“Why not?”
“Because your wedding was supposed to be four days ago.”
The sentence brought everything back.
The dress.
The roses.
Page nine.
He continued, “You do not need another man standing in front of you asking what you feel. You need room.”
My eyes stung.
“That might be the nicest rejection I’ve ever received.”
“I’m not rejecting you.”
Our eyes met.
The air changed.
Then he looked away first.
“I’m refusing to become an emergency exit.”
I swallowed.
Before I could answer, my phone buzzed.
A new email had arrived from Daniel.
Subject: No excuses.
The message was only three lines.
I knew about the draft. I knew what my mother wanted. I told myself I was making it less extreme and therefore making it fair. That is the lie I used to live with myself.
There was an attachment.
A letter.
I did not open it.
Instead I looked at Lucas.
“Can you sit here a little longer?”
“Yeah.”
No questions.
No touching.
Just yes.
Then another email arrived.
This one was from the hospitality group that had offered to invest in Vow & Venue.
Their subject line made me sit up straight.
REVISED OFFER — INDEPENDENT OF MERCER HOSPITALITY.
June called one second later.
“Do not read the number without me,” she screamed.
I opened the attachment anyway.
And for the first time since the rehearsal dinner, the future in front of me belonged entirely to me.
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